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turbid waters

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Literature Text

I’m going to tell you a lie:

       I can’t live without you

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you deathgrip to these placid waters
       while I contemplate
               the nuance of ‘we’

I’ve dreamt of raging rivers and sonorous seas
       that low whale-chested bellow
               glaciers tipped on edge

I’ve made love to the open ocean
       salt spray in my face
               deep creatures trawling below

I’ve beached myself on you
       and now I’m finished sunning

               you knew this whole time
       I was a wild thing

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I’m going to tell you the truth:

       I love you
               but not the way you want me to
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heartdialect's avatar
I appreciate the ocean imagery and how it permeates the entire piece. It seems like an apt comparison when we take the all-consuming, wild nature of love into account, you know? "I’ve beached myself on you" struck me especially because the notion of the persona being as helpless and vulnerable as a beached whale is just heartbreaking. 

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